PoisonHeart's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Immortal.]

i think my only suggestion would be that this coulda been colored and the font shoulda been different. without color, i have a rough time seperating what's going on in a panel. without a good font, i am reminded that this was typed out on a computer and not that i am spectator to an awesome, crazy future-world full of magic.

JazLyte responds:

I don't particularly want to color them, not gonna lie, but definitely taken into consideration. I've been getting the vibe from people's comments and friends' suggestions that my drawings may be hard to read. And trust me, I am WELL aware that typed fonts look like shit with my style. I'm still working on that one, it might be worth it for me to create a font or something. Who knows, still pretty new to this whole comic thing. Feedback much appreciated braugh :)

[Fire Starter]

i guess I don't understand why other artists tend to call drawings that are OBVIOUSLY QUITE GOOD TO OTHERS....why call them bad? i could understand if he had a head shaped like a potato and your foreshortening was absolutely way off, but it's not.
you took the effort to color this, the colors look great. the cowboy hat is perfect and hilarious, even his stance and the angle is pretty compelling. you pretty much OWN this character.

...i always have had trouble with placement of the face on these kinds of long narrows, i see you solved it here by providing a birds-eye view of a head-on gesture. awesome stuff.

Jemmuh responds:

It's not so much that I'm criticizing my talent, more that I'm making the comparison of effort I did then to now. I guess I should really rephrase that in the comments - It's not bad but I definitely notice how my techniques evolve and how much more effort I do these days (even though this Pyro artwork is barely a year old). I like what I did. I like how I did it. I'm more or less just raising my own standards. Self-motivated improvement, yada yada.

But thank you!

[The Amazing MJ]

lookin' good, dude. nice light.

beastkid7 responds:

Thanks man

[Unworldly Pyro]

dude, killer figure, but theboots don't seem as strong as the rest of the outfit...also seems like you got a little lazy on the wings, there...haha, still strong overall...the shoulder-strap things really pull the whole costume together, as well as that corset-cup thing. i like the inclusion of her summoning fire, also...gives mystique to an otherwise industrial feeling.

Jemmuh responds:

For the wings, it's like I said, I kept the general simplicity of the item over butchering them into something entirely different though I find the more I stare at it the more I want to go back and actually change the wings completely and forget about relating it to any pre-existing item that the model used. Regardless, I greatly appreciate the constructive criticism! Thanks.

[The Glider]

i really like the concept, and the character....gotta say his forearms see a little clunky, in that he doesn't seem to have upper arms here, and the shoulders come out kinda too far it seems....the glider is cool, but doesn't seem to mesh really well with teh character.

i really like the old-fashioned world-war styled costuming, and the creature itself looks awesome, the little curl in the lip that tucks into the cheek and his glossy eyes look great...as does the shine on his equipment (boots, jumpsuit, etc)

theonabi responds:

thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it... :D

[Beedrill]

i see what vinjay is sayin, the angles of his body don't come together right, and it looks like the drill is on the front of his abdomen, rather than the tail.

Gerkinman responds:

Ironically bees actually do have the drill come out of the front of the abdomen as opposed to the back like a tail. But I will forgive you :P

[J Law]

man, that is one hell of a weird-ass drawing

beastkid7 responds:

lol, I hope you don't mind me PM'ing about why. I can't seem to detach myself the the picture. So I can't see exactly whats wrong with it.

[Soul Release]

well, the first weird thing is the angle on her head....that jaw-line really throws it off

MAKOMEGA responds:

yeah i need to practic more that position of the head, always make that look like muscular dystrophy

[Squirtle]

pretty adorable

Gerkinman responds:

I think so to ha ha