I haven't really written a review for any of the amazing choose-your-own-adventure stories from KFSB. Mostly because I didn't know HOW. One thing I can say is that they always have a deep and replayable storyline. Like I says, it reminds me just of those old books from when I was a kid ("flip to page 86, or page 113!").
Out of 10....
GFX - N/A (none available)
SFX - N/A (none available)
DESIGN - 9 (excellent storyline and very thoughtful)
GAMEPLAY - 8 (highly immersive and replayable)
OVERALL....
This is a great series and modus operandi for you. My only suggestion would be title art, and occasional sound effects. Rock n roll!